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Panel 1
Locations:
Props:
  Box  
  Weapon  
Characters:
  Maker  
1: NARRATOR: He has never piloted before. But then, he's only been alive for fourteen hours. ...and no others are left to return the spirit.
Panel 2
Locations:
  Spaceship  
Props:
  Controls  
Characters:
  Maker  
1: NARRATOR: And while he understands the ship's controls, he makes no attempt to understand how the ship itself works. How it travels beyond light...yet remains matter. May its maker be blessed, it is beyond him.
Panel 3
Locations:
  Alien planet  
Props:
  Trees  
  Spaceship  
Characters:
1: NARRATOR: He exits the atmosphere and leaps the ship. But like every leap, it's one not only of space but of faith. And his faith was in a poor path home.
Panel 4
Locations:
  Space  
Props:
  Ore  
  Spaceship  
Characters:
  Maker  
1: NARRATOR: In the imperfect vacuum between systems, the ship intersects an errant piece of ore, not 50 mm wide.
Panel 5
Locations:
  Spaceship  
Props:
  Ore  
  Controls  
Characters:
  Maker  
1: NARRATOR: In infinitessimal instants, objects meet in an extraordinary dissection: the ore, a bulkhead. The ore, a display. The ore, a forehead. And so on toward the ring. It's a testament to the ship's maker that the damage barely ripples out. But like its pilot, this is now a dead ship, and it immediately begins to slow.

 

 

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